Is it a good idea for teenagers to work while studying at school?
why do teenagres need to work while studying, how does this help them ?
In the compostion I'm going to show you the advantages and the disadvantages of the issue.
On the one hand, the idea for teenagres to work while studing at school could be a bad idea beacuse it could have a negative effect on school work. Teenagres may get bad greads in school, moreover they may be tired because they are working on a until late hour of the day. They can have a hard time geting up on the morning that will be hard for them. not related to previous part
On the other hand, the idea of teenagres working while studying at school may be helpful beacuse of the folowing ideas: for some reasons.
They could be more likely to become more mature , beacuse they may learn to appreciate the value of the money.
And teenagres can be open to the real life and what happens in the adult world.
To sum up the main point teenagres dont need to work while studying because the school made for teenagres and they need to be there and not outside working hard .
My opinion is that teenagres need to be at school ,and not working while studying .
Omer : the 2 advantages you present are quite convincing but you need to expand on them abit more and expalin what you mean.
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